Wednesday, January 25, 2006

Will You Remember Me?

My first attempt to write a poem... no... I would hate it to be called a poem. It's all forgotten, but can you imagine how tough it was to do so. Sorry, No more words... the writing says it all !


I will remember you
Will u remember me?

Now that emotions are high, my pen won't stop
It wants to say something; it wants to be prop...

Remember the good times that we had...
The daily trip to bridge we made
It wasn't a matter of just evening walk.
Wasn’t it something deeper than the formal talk?

Remember the countless nights
We passed away just bickering.
The scintillating arguments, the heated disputes
Still the touches were titillating.

The tacit understanding, the unanimous decisions,
The living style,
Facing any situation, with a smile.
It all says we are alter ego
Had I been a little older
I would never let u go.

No doubt, it was first love for me
I was crazy, a little bit unnatural,
May be u have no feeling for me,
It's just unilateral.
But still I will remember u
Will u remember me?

Now that everything is settled down, we are getting apart
Wishes are still to make, promises are still to keep.

Wish u a great life ahead,
From my heart right to u,
Just know how much I care
And how I love always, too.

And yes, I will remember u
Will u remember me?



8 Comments:

At 7:01 PM, Blogger Subhashish said...

Sweet. :-*

 
At 7:12 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

A poem is never finished only abandoned.
and u knw a baby is growing when he/she asks Qs those hve answers. :)
A day ll come and u ll realise tho all those pal(s) r not wid u but u hve them as ur fixed deposits who r always willing to b matured whenver u want em to cash. :)

 
At 11:02 AM, Blogger Suchit Agarwal said...

The poem makes me realize that the time has really come, for all of us to part. Hope that everyone thinks that way and all of us remember each other.

Well said buddy!

 
At 12:59 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Badhiya hai dost. Bahut dil se likha hua hai.

 
At 1:02 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was fine piece of work. It was sweet. Keep good coming out of you.

 
At 9:57 PM, Blogger Loki said...

Gr8 poem. We all feel the same way my frnd...

 
At 3:24 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Tere ko tag kiya hai.. likh ur 8s.

 
At 10:59 PM, Blogger rahul thathoo said...

Well I have to say that I am much impressed by the poem, loved it for its simplicity and its ability to get the message thru, I just wonder whether it reached the person on which it was based?

 

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